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Tears stain the ground,
Assulting her face as they fall.
Crumpled on the ground while screaming what have you done?
Rain pelting her upturned face.
While blood mixes with sadness.
While the keys to her heart lay abandoned.
While her heart lay broken,
And her body bruised.
He left her like this.

The man who was killing the girl in rain,
Knew her pain,
for he to lay in the rain,
Slowly dying.
Though his death was not self inflicted.

Both loved the other,
But were miles apart as they slowly faded.
Death,
Their only sancuary.
Yet death would not rob them of life just yet.
For angels held both their hands,
Forcing their hearts to beat & their lungs to pulsate.
©2007-2009 ~blaqangelfromhell
:iconblaqangelfromhell:

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how love is something that kills when no one knows they are loved.

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:iconneongenesis-endsong:
woah!! this is my favorite ever piece of yours Dawn :glomp: i want to say so much but my hurt pulls me back, however its a mastery of emotion, your such a great writer in my eyes :hug:

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"Man fears the darkness, and so he scrapes away at the edges of it with fire."
:iconblaqangelfromhell:
i'm glad you like it, and its hard to say something about this piece because it leaves u sad torn and somehow in their shoes, i'm glad its a master of emotions, and thx, i think i'm a good writter too. i'm going to actually just post a new poem called Tornados Disaster. its not as long but i like it.

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Time passes by, but persistant demons still clutch on to me
:iconneongenesis-endsong:
hehe ^^ its ok your welcome :hug: and ill check out that piece for you soon :P

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"Man fears the darkness, and so he scrapes away at the edges of it with fire."
:iconlordbeazy:
Stark and jolting. You write with great clarity and feeling, like it a lot. :)

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The most successful serial killer of all time, is time itself.
Just thought I’d depress you. :D
:iconblaqangelfromhell:
thank you, i'm glad you like it.

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Time passes by, but persistant demons still clutch on to me

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